Crit Feedback:
Strengths:
Simular illustrations ties all books together.
Print processes book: good use of imergery
consistant
really good conscience for aesthetics
3 books are well categorised
images are nicely supported
tutorial idea is effective
Illustration on 'Stock book is effective
Improvements:
Some sections are misleading
some areas of layout are inconsistent
spot colour is illegible
check spelling of colour
check hyphens
keep text justified
shorten content to make it easier to read
Haverad reference
Group Feedback
- Postive: Good research
- Contents Page in some cases / Page numbers also.
- Basic type skills : Hyphenation ADRESS IT at the end of paragraph. Confused hierarchies.
- Proof Reading
- Line Spacing
ACTION PLAN:
* Need to Harvard reference
* need to cut down info collected that i sin
RE DESIGN BOOKLETS > MAYBE MERGE ALL FOR ONE BOOK.
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